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Visual interpretation of "The life that you escaped": A thousand fun-house mirrors arrayed; Around you, reflecting the fragmented

No. 045

November 13, 2024·11 lines·1 min read

The life that you escaped

And the lives you wish you led.

A thousand fun-house mirrors arrayed Around you, reflecting the fragmented Selves you wished you were, And the lives you wish you led. And no matter which way you tilt your head, you can't ever seem to meet their gaze— But only one looks right back at you, With the glimmering Gemini recognition— He lived the life that you escaped.

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A thousand fun-house mirrors arrayed

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head, you can't ever seem to meet their

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He lived the life that you escaped.

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