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Visual interpretation of "The times you were held": The times you were held; in those rare, accidental pauses,

No. 044

November 12, 2024·12 lines·1 min read

The times you were held

in the sand by the ocean shore.

The times you were held in those rare, accidental pauses, in the early mornings before you walked out the door on the way to school, reside in your memory like fingertip drawings in the sand by the ocean shore. And not until the day you hold another in that same special space does the light of the sun burn your creation into eternity.

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The times you were held

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like fingertip drawings

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your creation into eternity.

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