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Visual interpretation of "The underground snake-ship,": The underground snake-ship,; The blue hour bus ride,

No. 046

November 14, 2024·11 lines·1 min read

The underground snake-ship,

With the unassigned.

The underground snake-ship, The blue hour bus ride, Just so you could sit alone In those long hallways As you awakened your mind With the unassigned. You found a way to find the Sweetest peace that only exists, Like the darkness before the light That no one else cared to find.

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The underground snake-ship,

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