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Visual interpretation of "Your intuition knew": You'll never forget when you feel magic.; It'll grab you by the throat

No. 050

November 18, 2024·15 lines·1 min read

Your intuition knew

You'll never forget when you feel magic.

You'll never forget when you feel magic. It'll grab you by the throat And freeze-stamp the time and place— Like when your eyes went wide as you looked up At the three giant canvases in a loft in Brooklyn, Or when you heard a perfect dream In the passenger seat of your mother's Jeep In a Jersey Shore parking lot. How'd you know to walk so slow? Why'd you take your time? You felt the need to listen closely— Your intuition knew What not to miss.

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