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Visual interpretation of "Until you find the color": Can you arrange the blocks; And place yourself within?

No. 051

November 19, 2024·12 lines·1 min read

Until you find the color

And place yourself within?

Can you arrange the blocks And place yourself within? Can you draw the intricate maze You have to solve on the long hallway floor, And pencil in your evanescence? Can you craft another realm And slip—enter, Like a shadow ripple beneath a scrim? Ascend like string lights in a terraced atrium Until you find the color.

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Can you arrange the blocks

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Until you find the color.

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