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Visual interpretation of "Where dreams emerged...": Please don't take away the early mornings; on the subway, Biggie bumping in the

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February 2, 2025·11 lines·1 min read

Where dreams emerged...

where he first began to believe he deserved...

Please don't take away the early mornings on the subway, Biggie bumping in the Walkman. The wind whipping off the Hudson, cutting through my body on those midnight bike rides on the West Side Highway. The daily retracing of circles drawn by a child in crayon on the bedroom floor, where dreams emerged, where he first began to believe he deserved...

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Please don't take away the early mornings

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where he first began to believe he deserved...

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