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Visual interpretation of "Ribbons": Ribbons unfurl and dance across; your field of vision in the sunshine, their curls

No. 092

Essential
February 13, 2025·11 lines·1 min read

Ribbons

across the decades of your life.

Ribbons unfurl and dance across your field of vision in the sunshine, their curls and shimmers as imaginary and concrete as a dream seen through blinks across the decades of your life. They vanish in the wind if you raise your voice above a whisper— a simple redirection among the clouds.

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Where the door opens.

Ribbons unfurl and dance across

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Where the temperature changes.

across the decades of your life.

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among the clouds.

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Ribbons unfurl and dance across

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