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Visual interpretation of "A calculated leap across the darkness": Remember the vision; that came to you

No. 040

November 8, 2024·12 lines·1 min read

A calculated leap across the darkness

a whisper through the wind of time.

Remember the vision that came to you in the light, before you knew how to navigate the world. Now seems but a whisper through the wind of time. That energy is still within you— if you remember that every misstep was a calculated leap across the darkness, just to find out if you could fly.

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A way further in

Not the final meaning. Just a closer read, a better question, and a few nearby poems worth opening next.

Pay attention to the shift in the middle. That is often where the poem chooses who it is becoming.

Opening line

Where the door opens.

Remember the vision

Center line

Where the temperature changes.

a whisper through the wind of time.

Leaving line

The line to carry out with you.

just to find out if you could fly.

If you came here carrying something

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Memory

Good company for the seasons when you can feel your life changing shape under you.

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Notes for Collection No. 40

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Remember the vision

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