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Visual interpretation of "Yet the surface still, remains so perfect": The surface of the giant lake before you; Is so still,

No. 009

October 8, 2024·14 lines·1 min read

Yet the surface still, remains so perfect

Its reflection—

The surface of the giant lake before you Is so still, Its reflection— Colors of the sunset and the trees— More real Than sky or forest. But beneath that perfect mirror Lies the pain of everyone you've hurt— Like the mud and algae The rocks and sunken branches— And swimming in the darkest depths Are monsters of your own creation. Yet the surface still Remains so perfect.

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