Reading notes
A way further in
Not the final meaning. Just a closer read, a better question, and a few nearby poems worth opening next.
Read it like a night walk. Let the images arrive before you ask them to explain themselves.
Opening line
Where the door opens.
Shut your eyes when you know
Center line
Where the temperature changes.
Keep them shut
Leaving line
The line to carry out with you.
The shadow dance for your escape.
If you came here carrying something
Open this door when your thoughts feel loud after dark and you want something to sit beside them.
Themes in this poem
Best met slowly, especially when you are reading in the hours meant for sleep.
After you read
Stay in the archive a little longer.
If this one stayed with you, keep it. Then either leave a note, keep moving through the archive, or open a random poem.
Checking holds...
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Keep this one close.
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Send the line onward, save the story image, or pass the poem to someone who needs it.
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Listening room
Hear the poem in one breath.
A studio reading for the archive, voiced with care and restraint.