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Visual interpretation of "That syncopated rhythm": Listen closely to; The hole within yourself,

No. 034

November 2, 2024·10 lines·1 min read

That syncopated rhythm

To the hollow symphony.

Listen closely to The hole within yourself, So shapeless and so vast, To the hollow symphony. It will train your mind and ear To recognize that syncopated rhythm Stirring in the depths of someone you love. Know that what they need begins With the time and space to find their own Unfolding melody.

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Opening line

Where the door opens.

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Center line

Where the temperature changes.

To recognize that syncopated rhythm

Leaving line

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Unfolding melody.

If you came here carrying something

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LoveLonging

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