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Visual interpretation of "Sleeping on the couch in the old house": Sleeping on the couch in the old house; Where the faucet pours hope and doubt

No. 061

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November 28, 2024·11 lines·1 min read

Sleeping on the couch in the old house

in equal parts.

Sleeping on the couch in the old house Where the faucet pours hope and doubt in equal parts. The dreams you lived out and the mistakes you made haunt the breaks in the silences. The world outside grew up with you But when you cover your eyes and listen You can still hear yourself walking up the stairs And closing the door to your bedroom.

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Sleeping on the couch in the old house

Center line

Where the temperature changes.

haunt the breaks in the silences.

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And closing the door to your bedroom.

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