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Visual interpretation of "Remember the feeling": You look down; At your wedding shoes, from so long ago,

No. 013

October 12, 2024·15 lines·1 min read

Remember the feeling

Artful woven knot.

You look down At your wedding shoes, from so long ago, Those deep blue Leather loafers. Resting on each shoe Two circles pulled together by an Artful woven knot. You've walked through muddy grass, You've scuffed the toe. You can get them refurbished, Or you can sit there with a toothbrush and polish. Either way, each time you wear them, Even though it's only once in a blue, It's a chance to remember how you felt On that beautiful day, wearing your blue Wedding shoes.

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You've scuffed the toe.

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