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Visual interpretation of "Only by stripping the partial shrouds": Only by stripping the partial shrouds; Of indecision

No. 109

January 15, 2026·6 lines·1 min read

Only by stripping the partial shrouds

To taste the rain.

Only by stripping the partial shrouds Of indecision Can we face the darkest clouds With upturned heads And open mouths To taste the rain.

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