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Visual interpretation of "Invisible prisons you locked yourself in": The long coupon bus rides; To the neon towers in the darkness.

No. 048

November 16, 2024·12 lines·1 min read

Invisible prisons you locked yourself in

To the neon towers in the darkness.

The long coupon bus rides To the neon towers in the darkness. The buzzers on the unmarked doors, leading to hidden abattoirs— disguised as oases. Invisible prisons you locked yourself in, just to see if you could escape. No one will ever understand how hard it was to break through those bars— except the other inmates.

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The long coupon bus rides

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you locked yourself in,

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except the other inmates.

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The long coupon bus rides

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