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Visual interpretation of "In your arms": One day, when you're six years old; you may watch your Dad leave,

No. 005

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October 4, 2024·15 lines·1 min read

In your arms

vaguest sense of where he's going.

One day, when you're six years old you may watch your Dad leave, and have just the vaguest sense of where he's going. But what you won't know Is why he doesn't come back. One day, your own six-year old Will grow too big, to swoop up and cocoon Into your arms. But six-year old you, is always Right there waiting, And he never grows too big To hold in your arms

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One day, when you're six years old

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Will grow too big, to swoop up and

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