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Visual interpretation of "Imagine you could watch": Imagine you could watch; everything you don't need

No. 066

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December 2, 2024·13 lines·1 min read

Imagine you could watch

until you had nothing left to throw.

Imagine you could watch everything you don't need spin and twist, float and fly down to the ground, like the toys you slipped through the bars of your bedroom window, thirty-two stories in the sky. You would keep going, until you had nothing left to throw. And now you don't know if you remember that day because of how it felt to let things go, or because knew why the doorbell rang.

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