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Visual interpretation of "As if you both knew": You can't grasp what you'd most wish.; Tiny dust motes dancing and

No. 083

December 14, 2024·11 lines·1 min read

As if you both knew

You can't grasp what you'd most wish.

You can't grasp what you'd most wish. Tiny dust motes dancing and shimmering In the early morning light of the office— A perfect angle, a perfect brightness That you'd never seen before. It only lasted a minute Before life moved on. Your child sat on your lap later that day, And you held on so much more tightly, As if you both knew what you had seen.

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